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This story was created during a recent
study of the book of Daniel. This particular story is very loosely
connected with Daniel chapter ten. I loved writing this story. There
may be all sorts of holes in the plot, but I love the characters, and I
love the melodrama.
Title: Remember This
Authors: Bob Freye
She
had turned to hand the porter a few shillings for helping wrestle her
trunk
onto the train, and when she turned back, he was there, tall and dark,
his
jacket tossed casually over one shoulder, and his white shirt and
old-school
striped tie covered in dark oil stains.
“Hello,
Winnie,” he said. “I got your note.”
“Derrek,”
she said. “You came.”
She
had often dreamed of seeing him again, but she had imagined a more
perfect
setting. Not this.
“Of
course I came, Winnie. Wild horses couldn’t keep me from this meeting.”
“But
Derrek,” she said, struggling to keep the disappointment out of her
voice, “I
sent that note weeks ago. Why didn’t you come sooner?”
“Yes,
well,” he glanced down at his shoes, which were uncharacteristically
scuffed
and soiled. “I started out as soon as I got the letter, back on the
third, I
think it was.”
“It’s
the twenty-fourth, Derrek. I had only three weeks for my vacation. I
arrived
here on the third.”
“That
sounds right.” He nodded as he computed the dates in his head. “You
sent the
note a few days ahead of your trip, and in keeping with normal post
office
traffic, the postman delivered it to my door on the same day you
arrived here.
Something of a coincidence, wouldn’t you say?”
Perhaps,
she thought, but that wasn‘t the point.
“And
you started out the same day?” she asked, sounding unconvinced.
“The
very same day,” he assured her.
“Then
what in the world took you so long?”
“I
told you,” he said, sounding somewhat wounded. “Wild horses! But the
important
thing is that they couldn’t keep me from this meeting.”
The
porter returned to warn Winnifred that the train was about to leave. He
asked
Derrek if he would be traveling as well.
“Well,
I don’t suppose I can,” Derrek answered. “I don’t have a ticket. I only
came to
see Winnie.”
“And
now you’ve seen me,” she declared, adding with an imperious tone, “and
now you
don’t.”
She
turned on her heels and stomped toward the passenger car.
“Wait!”
Derrek called out. “I have something to tell you.”
She
whirled around with fire in her eyes.
“Why
didn’t you come and tell me when I had time to listen? If it was so
important
to tell me something, then why didn’t you come a week ago, or two weeks
ago?
You could have come a half hour ago, and it would have been better than
this!
But no! You had to—,” she shook with the effort of finding the right
words,
“you had to wrestle wild horses instead of spending time with me!”
“I
didn’t actually wrestle them,” Derrek explained. “I just had to fix the
car
after I ran into one.”
She
leaned toward him to ask what he meant, but thought better of it.
Giving her
head a shake, she waved off his explanation and turned again.
“It
was quite a fender-bender,” Derrek called out. “Of course, the horse
will be
fine. Just a busted leg, but the vet put that right. I’m out a bit for
the
bill, but it was my fault, since I was hurrying to get here to see you.
But no
matter.”
The
porter saw her turn back again. He wondered if he should pick her up
and throw
her onto the train, but that wasn’t exactly standard railroad practice.
Instead
he signaled the engineer to wait.
Winnie
walked slowly back toward Derrek. “I don’t understand. You had to take
care of
a horse?”
“Well,
not just me. The vet did most of the work. Then I was back in my car
and on my
way.” He held his breath for a moment, as if avoiding the next part of
the
story. “Except—”
“Except
what?”
“Except
the fool thing wouldn’t start.” He certainly sounded apologetic. “A
little
problem with the oil.”
When
he didn’t offer more information, she prodded.
“A
little problem?”
“A
rather big problem, I’m afraid. There was no oil in the motor.”
Her
expression grew dark.
“A
hose was dislodged in the accident, or maybe it was a fitting.
Apparently I’d
forgotten to take the car in for service at the recommended intervals,
and
things had just deteriorated, mechanically speaking. Well, things have
been
busy at the farm, with the increasing demand for wool. And I’ve had to
spend
time with the solicitors, plotting business strategy, and all that.”
She
had turned away from him again and was hurrying to the train.
“And
of course, I was coming here to meet you!” he called out.
He
rushed after her, but the train had started moving as soon as
Winnifred’s feet lifted
from the platform. Derrek walked along the car until he saw her fall
heavily
into a seat. Lucky for him that she sat on his side of the train.
“I
have to tell you something,” he yelled up at the window.
She
pulled the glass down and poked her head out.
“It
was good seeing you,” she called down to him. “Think of me sometime, if
you
aren’t too busy running over livestock with your car.”
“I
have to tell you something,” he repeated.
“It’s
too late, Derrek,” she said.
“But
that’s just it. It’s not too late.” He was walking beside the train,
picking
his way through the people that still lined the platform. As he walked,
he yelled
up to her, “Our story is for another time.”
“What?”
she called back.
“Remember
this,” he hollered, “it will be sometime in the future, after a month
of sometimes,
but I will be there for you. After a winter of sometimes, I will come
to you.”
He
nearly tripped over an old man who had stooped down to tie a shoe, but
Derrek somehow
regained his balance and ran to catch up.
“Other
men may promise you the world, but give me just a handful of sometimes,
and I
will be there.”
The
sight of him, running along, desperately trying to catch up to her, it
was
pitiful and wonderful at the same time. She could feel her heart begin
to melt.
“Remember
this, Winnie! Remember this!” He was slowing, and the train was
beginning to
pick up speed. “A handful of sometimes, and I will come to you!”
“You
must, Derrek!” she shouted back. “You must!”
“And
I promise, Winnie,” he shouted as her car pulled away, “that I will
find a way
to get my automobile on a program of regular maintenance.”
His
legs finally gave out, and he slumped over with his hands on his knees,
gasping
for breath as the train rumbled down the track.
Winnie
closed the window and combed through her windblown hair with her
fingers. What
had he said at the last? Something about being irregular?
That
couldn’t be good. But things would be different in the future. She knew
that,
now. A handful of sometimes, he had said. Give him a handful of
sometimes, and
they would be together.
Yes,
she would wait for him. And she made a pledge, right then and there.
When
that day came, she would make certain, every morning, that he would
have the
proper amount of fiber in his diet.
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