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I made up the title almost out of the
blue, because this is too small a snippet to deserve a title. It was
written for practice and was intended purely as a writing prompt. The
ending is rather tight and would require some creativity, so maybe it
wasn't much of a prompt. But here it is.
Title: Among the Missing: An
Inspector Pflemming Mystery
Authors: Bob Freye
“And you
never saw him again?”
Inspector
Bryce Pflemming studied
her face out of the corner of his eye as he doodled in his little
notebook. It
was a trick they had taught him at the police school. Rather dishonest
behavior, but if the truth be told, he had practiced all sorts of
deviousness
when interviewing people associated with a case. His most effective
methods
were little more than justifiable lying.
“No,
Inspector,” she gasped, “I
never saw him again.”
She clutched
the dainty
handkerchief, from time to time moving it to her face to dab at her
eyes or
wipe her cheek. She did not sob, exactly, though her breathing was
labored,
like a silent weeping. Since he had come to the house, the tears had
not
stopped. Inspector Pflemming was amazed. She should be quite dehydrated
by now.
“You’ll tell
me if he tries to get
in contact with you.” It was a question, but more of a suggestion, a
reminder.
He would be surprised if her husband actually called, judging by the
feel of
this case.
“Well, he
has called.”
For a
moment, Pflemming forgot
about his little notebook and looked up. That had not taken long.
“When?”
“The other
day.”
“What did he
say?”
“Not much.”
She tried to remember
the rambling conversation. “He wanted something.”
“Why didn’t
you say something
about this sooner?” he asked.
“You never
asked if he called.”
“Mrs. Maar,
you told us
that your husband was missing.”
“Yes, and he
is, isn’t he? I mean,
he isn’t here, is he? Look around." She waved an arm imperiously
through the air. "He should be here, but he isn’t.”
“Mrs. Maar,
if you know where a
person is, he can’t be a missing person.”
“Well, I
don’t know that.” She
dabbed at her eye. “He didn’t say where he was.”
“Did you ask
him?”
She stopped
dabbing and looked
straight at Pflemming.
“That would
be rude.”
The
inspector tucked the notebook
back into his coat and crossed his arms.
“Mrs. Maar,
do you have any idea
why your husband left home?”
“No.”
“None at
all?”
She turned
away from him and
walked slowly to the window overlooking the Victorian gardens that she
kept
impeccably.
“No,” she
repeated.
“I don’t
believe you.”
When she
turned back toward him,
he was surprised by the look of conviction on her face.
“I have
proof.”
“Of what?”
the inspector asked.
“Proof of your husband’s disappearance? Proof of the fact that you
don’t know
why he left?”
“Yes,” she
said simply. She walked
deliberately to a table set against the wall. There she found a small
box. She
lifted it carefully and held it out to the inspector. “You wanted
proof,” she
said, “and I have it.”
It was a
case for a pair of
eyeglasses. Inspector Pflemming took it from her and opened it. There
were no
eyeglasses inside. But it was not empty.
“Yes,” the
inspector admitted,
“you have proof.”
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